Final Music Video

Conversation

Narrative and Feedback

So I sent the video to the singer (Emma) and she has replied with her thoughts, and I replied back.

I've also had one comment on the my facebook page.

So it seems the narrative won't suffice. I am in the middle of coming up with an idea and trying to find the time/location to do it.

Editing

For the past 3 weeks, on and off, I have been editing my video.



This is what I have so far. I think some of the performing scenes need to be quicker and choppier. However the narrative doesn't seem to be working. I need to make it fit the lyrics a bit more so I shall have a rethink, try and come up with another idea and try and arrange a weekend where I can do more filming.